I'm Done! (now I need some serious feedback)

So if you really want the rest of the story it's on the page. I'm not posting anymore.

SIIIIGGHHH.

I now I have to work on the second draft...

First things first. Feedback, Melanie I know you finished my book, I'd like some help. I already know most of the things I need to fix. BUT do you have anything to say about my characters specifically the antagonists. Do they make sense? What about my plot? Do Riva's actions make sense? ANYTHING is helpful at this point. I'm starting the rewriting process so I could use whatever you guys got.

Thanks guys.