Wednesday, November 30, 2011

Princess Rivalee (Part 15)

The next bit is written and on the way, I just need to edit it because I wrote it at like 3 in the morning, plus there's a letter and I'm trying to figure out how I want to do that....

It's coming, trust me.

As for now I will not tell you about today because I'm late to put mics on people. I'll be right back and post 16 for you but for now, voila. A little taste.

Princess Rivalee (part 15)

Riva woke up crying. In her head the only thing she could hear was, “That was badly done.”
Words like “careless”, “disappointed”, “poorly”, “failure.” From strangers, Council members, Kadric, Ergil, Glen, her father. She sat on her bed sobbing, tears pouring down her face. Her limbs had gone completely limp. Weakly she hit the cushions on her bed, defying an unfair world.
I’m trying! I’m trying... I’m only a girl, I can’t- I can’t be perfect. I’M TRYING!!!

Soundlessly she screamed.

Monday, November 28, 2011

Princess Rivalee (Part 13 and 14)

Sunday I was far away from a computer. So no cigar. Today I have two for you.

Princess Rivalee (Part 13 and 14)

Riva was able to establish a routine. Her morning began with conditioning and basic exercises, she did what she could within her study. She’d decided keep sleeping in her study; it was secure and private. Any documents she didn’t want others getting their hands on, she kept in here. Her progress in magic was also kept a secret, done in the seclusion of the spelled walls.

After getting into a good sweat, Riva would bathe, eat and prepare for the day. Maids would dress her and fix her hair, while she scanned reports. She couldn’t afford to have a spare moment to herself. When she had first started training, the small amount of sleep had been difficult to function on. Now she had adjusted and the hours that would’ve been lost to sleep could be put to much better uses.

There were so many things to manage: population, employment, food production, trade and commerce, crime, law and natural disasters, education, military needs and the position of the enemy, housing, health, entertainment ... there was always some problem somewhere that needed attention.

She had taken to keeping a clerk with her at almost all hours of the day, he or she could write down thoughts or orders she had and take them to the appropriate parties. Then she set up a second small study where she could work in the open and others could find her.

Kadric strode into her open-study. “I have a present for you.” he said, taking a seat.

Riva looked up once and smiled, always happy to see her mentor. “Really? Does it happen to be a ten thousand gold pieces? Cause I could really use it right about now.”

“Unfortunately not, my Princess. I bring you, Lloyd of Gereth. He’s the son of the late Harol of Gareth.” Kadric motioned for a young man of about Riva’s age into the study.

Riva paused in her flurry of paper. Gereth was a fairly new region and the family name was not as respected as the older noble names. She stood, examining the young man carefully. He wasn’t as tall as Glen- Riva sighed inwardly. Will I never be able to compare men to someone other than Glen?

Looking again, she tried to keep a partial mind. He was thin and lanky, with an angular face. His black hair that was swept back and tied neatly, but it made him look like a stork. At a first glance no one, would believe he was capable of carrying on his father’s household, but his eyes told a different story. They were dark and firm, a glint of fire that assured her he was capable of whatever task assigned.

Riva held out a hand and as was custom, he bent and kissed it. “I’m sorry to hear about your father. He was a steady and loyal man.” Even if he couldn’t manage his financials.

Gereth bowed his head to thank her for honoring his father. “He was indeed one to rely on his heart. Thank you, your Majesty.”

Kadric interrupted ignoring the social procedures. “Lloyd, here, came to take his place on the Council. I assured him you would welcome him.”

Riva nodded graciously. “Of course, I must say I’m impressed at your dedication to the realm. Your father only died a few weeks ago and rarely appeared at the Council.”

Gareth nodded, “My father did not see the importance of involving himself with the decisions of the King. He was concerned about his own people and focused his efforts to them. However with our land so close to the border, I was hoping to sway the Council to aid us.” His eyes flashed to Riva’s inquiring, but not pleading.

Riva smiled charmingly at him, it was the smile she pulled out for all diplomatic situations. “I’m afraid I can’t promise you anything, but you are welcome to join us.”

“I understand.” His expression was blank and controlled.

They chatted for little while longer about the weather and travel conditions until Gareth excused himself.

Riva turned to Kadric, eyebrows up. “How is he a present?”

Kadric’s grin widened. “I have reason to suspect that our friend Lloyd has acquired some very interesting documents. Documents that perhaps a princess in your position could use.”

“Spit it out, Kadric. You know I don’t like playing games with you. You barely even try to conceal your emotions. It’s infuriating seeing you bursting with excitement and only knowing enough that the answer is just beyond my reach.” Kadric loved teasing her and would lead her on for hours with hints and insinuations.

“He may have the evidence you need to get your spy. He asked me to introduce him.” Kadric looked down at his nails. He wasn’t going to say any more without a push.

He’s like a child with a sweet who purposely waits to eat it in front of you.

Riva sighed and massaged her forehead. “Is he going to give me this evidence?”

Kadric gave her a look. “Please Princess, surely you know you can’t get something for nothing.”

He was right. Gareth wanted troops to protect his people and Alsteare didn’t have any to spare. “Kadric, you’ve just placed another problem I need to deal with on me. How is this a present?”

“Use him. I’m sure you’ll figure it out, Princess. You are my pupil, after all.” With that he stood and strode smugly out of the room.

Someday I might forget myself and set him on fire. The image brought a smirk to her face. I hope by then I’ve learned enough to beat him. She picked up a quill and started writing notes. Maybe now is a good time to make my move.

*****

The Earl Delphane received summons to the Princess’s study the same day. He wasn’t sure what to think. He reread the passage and thanked the page boy. He smoothed his mustache and tried to determine what she could possibly want. It had been nearly a month since she had taken her place at the Council’s head and nothing of consequence had happened. Many of the members whispered that she was just a puppet of Kadric’s.

Delphane’s expressions wrinkled in concern, he couldn’t see Kadric making a play like that for power. Kadric had enough power to take the kingdom in any number of ways and this certainly didn’t seem like his style.

The Earl thought back to the Princess. She was not what he had been expecting. Something about her made him itch. The child was rumored to have been shut away in her rooms for the most part of her life but she showed no fear or insecurities of any kind. Either she was a brilliant actor or she was hiding something.

He sighed. When he had seen her run out into the street to stop her father, he thought that she was either the craziest or bravest person he’d ever seen. He knew that the King and the Princess didn’t have a loving relationship and had seen the King’s wrath...

He shuddered. But then she had come into the Council with a cool and calm air, full of confidence and power. The members had waited for weeks to see what she would do, but she never came out and said aloud her opinion. She hid herself in her study and read reports all day, messages coming in and out all day.

The Earl stopped at the Princess’s study and knocked. There was one guard outside her door but other than that the long hall was deserted.

“Come in.”

The Earl opened the door and found the Princess writing in very neat script, dipping her pen every so often. Several strands of hair had come undone and her fingers were covered in ink, a clerk and a runner stood by her desk. She looked up and smiled, “I’ll only be a moment, please sit.” She indicated the soft chair before her desk.

Feeling as if he was intruding the Earl sat and watched warily.

“Send these to Captain Glen and the King. They will be expecting them.” She blotted the ink and folded the letters crispy, addressing them herself. “Thank you.” She told the runner. Who touched his hat and ran out the door. The clerk excused himself and shut the door quietly behind him.

Riva sighed loudly and was about to rub her eyes when she saw all the ink on her fingers. Absentmindedly she pulled out a handkerchief and wiped at her hands. “I must apologize, I should have accepted you more graciously but there were matters to attend to.”

The Earl assured her she had not offended him, noticing that her answering smile was weary.

Her eyes wandered around the room as she gathered her thoughts. “I’ve called you here because this has come to my attention.” She reached behind her and retrieved several sheets of paper and a small record book. She handed them to him and leaned against her desk.

He took them and felt the blood drain from his face and hands. They were detailed accounts of the Palace’s Treasury.

“I’m sure you’ll notice that several thousand gold pieces are missing from the records. I did quite a bit of digging and found these from the previous accountant. Who was released- I believe on your orders?”

The Earl looked up but had nothing to say. It was clear who was the culprit. He’d thought he’d gotten rid of it all. How could he have missed this? He looked in the Princess’s eyes, they were cold and pitying. Could he get any mercy from her? No... He’d taken thousands of gold pieces, something like that couldn’t just be forgiven.

He let the sheets fall in despair. He was going to die. The Princess would have no other choice but to kill him. He’d stolen from her father, she’d be expected to kill him. Then she would strip his family of all they had and they would be left in the streets...

“Can you tell me why you took the money? I’d like to know what was so important that you had to steal for.” The Princess whispered voice still cold.

“Gambling.” He choked. “Gambling. I lost it all... I thought I could get it back...”

The Princess sucked in a breath. After a moment she said listlessly, “I see.”

Stifling silence filled the room.

“You know that I have to execute you.” She whispered.

The Earl let out a sob and nodded.

The Princess turned to meet his eyes. “But if I killed you, all I would have is a dead man and a large debt.” She paced furiously. “You will pay back the debt. You will live on only the essentials, sell all the comforts of your home and work as a Council member without payment. Do you understand me?” She stopped in front of him and stated very clearly and sharply. “If you gamble, your life will be forfeit. I will kill you.”

“You’re going to let me live?” Delphane couldn’t believe his ears. Relief made his body weak and he sank back into his seat trembling.

“Don’t thank me yet,” The Princess muttered. “You’re life is going to get very difficult for both you and your family.” She rubbed her temples. “I need that money and I will not allow you to tax your citizens for your mistake. Plus, I need your help.”

“Help?” He asked.

She nodded solemnly. “Someone on the Council is a spy. They are leaking information to Sealidan and it is taking a serious toll on our army. I received a message from my father informing me that they had eradicated all of the spies from the military... He didn’t tell me at what price... But that means that only someone who is present when we discuss-”

“When we discuss the condition of the war would know the position and numbers of our men.” The Earl finished. He considered what he had just heard. “How do you know it’s not me? How do you know I’m not the one getting the information.”

The Princess was silent, wearily searching for an answer.

“I don’t know, but I can’t imagine a spy being careless enough to steal from the palace and almost get himself killed. Still, I’m placing a great deal of faith in you. I need you to be my eyes and ears among the others. Tell me what you can, investigate your own people, do everything you can.” She rubbed her eyes. “I’m going to have to ask you to leave, Delphane. My headache’s coming back and I still have a great deal of work to finish. I’m assigning my clerk to you. He’ll be able to reach me quickly and confidentially.”

“And he’ll be able to keep an eye on me?”

The Princess smiled sadly, “I cannot afford to be naive and overly trusting, please forgive me.”

The Earl stood and bowed deeply. “Of course, I am in your debt your Majesty. If you require anything of me, do not hesitate to ask.”

“Thank you, you have no idea how it eases my mind to know that you are with me, Earl of Delphane.”

After hearing a very cold and expressionless voice, Delphane had not been expecting the sincere relief and sudden ease in the Princess’s voice. In that moment felt a surge of love and compassion towards this young woman who was trying to take on the world. He knew he was truly with the princess.

*****

Within the next few weeks massive changes were made. Four judges were thrown into prison or executed for crimes. Two nobles were stripped of their titles and their lands were awarded to others that Riva had chosen with the help of Kadric, Ergil (who was becoming increasingly useful) and Delphane. With each success the Council became more cowed and repentant. They were complacent even if they weren’t truly loyal. Kadric was constantly telling her that they would come to appreciate her in time.

As for the rest...

There was nothing substantial, nothing she could find that would indicate traitors or similar behavior. Despite her best efforts the only thing she could do was to wait, watch and kick out anyone she could get evidence against.

The other Council members loyalty was bought through fear and intimidation, but Riva would take it. During Council she made it clear she wanted to hear opinions but that she was the leading power, what she said went. As long as there was that structure everyone was heard and projects were completed.

Riva rubbed her temples as they sat in conference. Judge Curtis was going off about an obscure law that had very little relevance to the matter they were discussing. He had the kind of voice that grated on her nerves, he had to go over every little detail before finally reaching a decision and even after he reached a final decision he kept going over the pros and cons. His years and experience kept the rest of the members from blatantly cutting him off, but they all felt that enough was enough. For some reason today was especially horrible, all Riva wanted to do was smack the older man and remind him that they did not have the leisure of time. In the end Riva had to end the Council early. Her anger was bubbling over and she was having a hard time keeping her expression smooth and polite.

As she walked to her open-study she took deep breaths trying to expend the pent up emotion. By the time she had finally reached her destination she had begun to relax. I need to get more sleep. She muttered to herself. Sleeping between meetings was not cutting it.

Ergil shuffled through her doors.

She glanced up. “Anything new?”

He shrugged, settling in the comfort of the seat near her desk. “There’s been some chatter, nothing definite.”

Riva flipped through reports. “Who?”

“Colonel Merrel, Judge Warthal and Furlong and a few of the merchants.”

She shook her head. “None of the merchants have had enough time on the Council to be the spies, besides there are always whispers when it comes to merchants. Judge Warthal doesn’t have the right motivation, what about Baron Nadsady?”

Ergil shook his head, poking his nose around her desk.

Riva smiled. “The chocolates are all gone thanks to a certain someone.”

He sighed piteously. “I wonder who that cruel person could be?”

She hmmmed non-commitally.

“Maybe I should leave you to it. It looks like you’re busy.”

Riva looked up. “I’m sorry, Ergil. I just want to stop him. Every time I get a letter from Glen and my father it’s worse. They’ve lost more men than I’m comfortable with. I thought for sure we had something with Nasady but it’s been three weeks since we were able to get eyes on him.”

Ergil nodded sagely. “How fares the kingdom?”

“Better... much better but not quite... there.” Riva put aside a stack of papers to sign and seal.

Ergil stood, smiling. “You’re distracted.” He kissed her forehead. “Good luck, my Queen.”

Riva looked up, surprised, but he was already leaving.

Saturday, November 26, 2011

Princess Rivalee (11 and 12)

So first failure... I didn't post yesterday. :( Mostly because I didn't have access to a computer last night and so I couldn't post.

So I'm giving you two today, one's really short and the other is longer.

PS. Went to see Three Musketeers...
it was okay, don't expect anything thought provoking. It was pretty much just entertaining. I did like some of the fight scenes they seemed fairly realistic. But mostly it was just crazy.

Yup... It was okay. Now my story, I really hope you like it. I really need to plot it out real fast before I give you too much more, I've kind of reached the point where I have a general idea of what I need to do next but not really... It's a work in progress. I think I'll map it out better tonight for ya.

Anyway, Enjoy.

Princess Rivalee (Parts 11 and 12)

The treasury accounts were a mess and nearly impossible to sort through. Riva spent hours pouring over them, making calculation after calculation in her head. Nothing added up! The accounts would say one thing, when the actual hard cash would say another. Riva was determined to beat this. She had given her life to studies and she wasn’t about to let simple accounts get the better of her.

One thing was for sure, the Palace had borrowed from several merchants to continue manufacturing weapons and they wanted payment soon. They had made that clear enough to her.

Riva enlisted Ergil’s help for the spy matter. If there was someone in the Palace that was acting suspiciously she wanted to know. Everything he heard, she heard. He encouraged several of servants to listen in on conversations and “clean” rooms regularly. It took time because rumors were generally just that, rumors.

As time went by, she got some absolutely tickling information: affairs, hoarding food, smuggling, several different kinds of stealing, breaking contracts and promises, dirty judges, lots of bribes etc... etc... But no spies.

She could still use the information though, but she would need hard evidence. No one would believe the word of a servant against the word of a member of the Council.

Riva sat back contemplating the best procedure to take. It would differ with each case, she knew the members well enough now to know how they would react. She’d been watching them very closely and while that was useful, it wouldn’t be enough. She needed allies and she would get them with whatever means necessary.

*****

Riva was able to establish a routine. Her morning began with conditioning and basic exercises, she did what she could within her study. She’d decided keep sleeping in her study; it was secure and private. Any documents she didn’t want others getting their hands on, she kept in here. Her progress in magic was also kept a secret, done in the seclusion of the spelled walls.

After getting into a good sweat, Riva would bathe, eat and prepare for the day. Maids would dress her and fix her hair, while she scanned reports. She couldn’t afford to have a spare moment to herself. When she had first started training, the small amount of sleep had been difficult to function on. Now she had adjusted and the hours that would’ve been lost to sleep could be put to much better uses.

There were so many things to manage: population, employment, food production, trade and commerce, crime, law and natural disasters, education, military needs and the position of the enemy, housing, health, entertainment ... there was always some problem somewhere that needed attention.

She had taken to keeping a clerk with her at almost all hours of the day, he or she could write down thoughts or orders she had and take them to the appropriate parties. Then she set up a second small study where she could work in the open and others could find her.

Kadric strode into her open-study. “I have a present for you.” he said, taking a seat.

Riva looked up once and smiled, always happy to see her mentor. “Really? Does it happen to be a ten, thousand gold pieces? Cause I could really use it right about now.”

“Unfortunately not, my Princess. I bring you, Lloyd of Gereth. He’s the son of the late Harol of Gareth.” Kadric motioned for a young man of about Riva’s age into the study.

Riva paused in her flurry of paper. Gereth was a fairly new region and the family name was not as respected as the older noble names. She stood, examining the young man carefully. He wasn’t as tall as Glen- Riva sighed inwardly. Will I never be able to compare men to someone other than Glen?

Looking again, she tried to keep a partial mind. He was thin and lanky, with an angular face. His black hair that was swept back and tied neatly, but it made him look like a stork. At a first glance no one, would believe he was capable of carrying on his father’s household, but his eyes told a different story. They were dark and firm, a glint of fire that assured her he was capable of whatever task assigned.

Riva held out a hand and as was custom, he bent and kissed it. “I’m sorry to hear about your father. He was a steady and loyal man.” Even if he couldn’t manage his financials.

Gereth bowed his head to thank her for honoring his father. “He was indeed one to rely on his heart. Thank you, your Majesty.”

Kadric interrupted ignoring the social procedures. “Lloyd, here, came to take his place on the Council. I assured him you would welcome him.”

Riva nodded graciously. “Of course, I must say I’m impressed at your dedication to the realm. Your father only died a few weeks ago and rarely appeared at the Council.”

Gareth nodded, “My father did not see the importance of involving himself with the decisions of the King. He was concerned about his own people and focused his efforts to them. However with our land so close to the border, I was hoping to sway the Council to aid us.” His eyes flashed to Riva’s inquiring, but not pleading.

Riva smiled charmingly at him, it was the smile she pulled out for all diplomatic situations. “I’m afraid I can’t promise you anything, but you are welcome to join us.”

“I understand.” His expression was blank and controlled.

They chatted for little while longer about the weather and travel conditions until Gareth excused himself.

Riva turned to Kadric, eyebrows up. “How is he a present?”

Kadric’s grin widened. “I have reason to suspect that our friend Lloyd has acquired some very interesting documents. Documents that perhaps a princess in your position could use.”

“Spit it out, Kadric. You know I don’t like playing games with you. You barely even try to conceal your emotions. It’s infuriating seeing you bursting with excitement and only knowing enough that the answer is just beyond my reach.” Kadric loved teasing her and would lead her on for hours with hints and insinuations.

“He may have the evidence you need to get your spy. He asked me to introduce him.” Kadric looked down at his nails. He wasn’t going to say any more without a push.

He’s like a child with a sweet who purposely waits to eat it in front of you.

Riva sighed and massaged her forehead. “Is he going to give me this evidence?”

Kadric gave her a look. “Please Princess, surely you know you can’t get something for nothing.”

He was right. Gareth wanted troops to protect his people and Alsteare didn’t have any to spare. “Kadric, you’ve just placed another problem I need to deal with on me. How is this a present?”

“Use him. I’m sure you’ll figure it out, Princess. You are my pupil, after all.” With that he stood and strode smugly out of the room.

Someday I might forget myself and set him on fire. The image brought a smirk to her face. I hope by then I’ve learned enough to beat him. She picked up a quill and started writing notes. Maybe now is a good time to make my move.

Thursday, November 24, 2011

Princess Rivalee (Part 10)

HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!!!

It's 12:25 again, but I don't really feel bad. I gave my blog a new look, it's much classier. I'm still trying to figure out if I should have a picture or something, but I can't find a good one. So as of now there is nothing there.

I stuffed myself full of goodness today... or yesterday I guess. SO GOOD! We didn't get to do a fire because it was too windy. Sad... so no pictures and we had just a traditional dinner. I ate and ate and ate and then I slept. I was exhausted cause we went to play basketball in the morning and I had stayed up late watching Buffy the Vampire Slayer. HA! I love that show. It's so easy to get addicted to these things.

Anyway, it's time to get on with life. Here's the next chapter. I'm still compiling a list of people and trying to flesh out their characters. It's just a lot very very quickly and I'm still fuzzy on lots o' things. But here's the next chapter, rather long full of details, enjoy.

Princess Rivalee (Part 10)

The very same day Riva put her plan into action. She had to become a part of the Council and she wasn’t about to wait. The longer she waited the longer the Council could run amok. Glen had hinted at spies, Riva was determined to find them.

She had taken several weeks with the Court Magician to get an understanding of their government with all the pros and cons. Essentially the King had the last say in all decisions he was in charge of the military and therefore held the power, the nobles had the land and the merchants had the money. There were several go-betweens that kept the peace between king, noble and civilian.

The King’s Council was designed to allow everyone to put forth their opinion about issues of the realm, based on what the King heard he could make a decision.

Within Alsteare there were sixteen principalities placed in the hands of the nobles. They had certain liberties but were ultimately under the King. Each land had two representatives that would report to the capital. Either one of the representatives of the Noble himself were required to be present at Council. They would switch off every four to six months. These representatives were chosen by the King and paid by the noble in charge. The King could release the representative at any time. This was supposed to keep their loyalties evenly split between the King and the Noble in question.

Also required to appear in Council was a judge from each sect. These judges were chosen by the people and paid by the King- again this was to ensure loyalty to both parties. There were at least two judges selected in each region so they could switch at six months. They were to be the voices of the people. If there was a major problem that needed to be addressed by the King it could be brought by the judges.

There was usually a major-general from the Military district and four others of a slightly lower rank. They were a constant presence in the Council due to the conflict with Sealidan. The war had been kept to the borders mostly, but if the Sealidans were to invade father in a Martial Law would be put in place.

There were a total of nine merchants who had bought their way on to the council. No more than ten were allowed at a time. There were changes with the merchants frequently. Whoever was supporting the King most got a seat, those who couldn’t afford it, didn’t get the opportunity. The merchants were supposed to represent the middle class, the working class. There were always mixed results.

Finally, the Court Magician and an occasional magically inclined companion were present as well.

Riva took a deep breath and stood as tall as possible, her expression blank and cold. Kadric announced her presence. “Princess Rivalee of Alsteare.”

She held her head high and walked with purpose into the Court. With a single glance she could read several different expressions, many were carefully blank, polite, a few were out right repulsed, others were confused or curious. She didn’t plan on letting them get anything from her.

Earlier that week she had discussed different strategies that could be used in Court. They had come up with two that were likely to work: manipulation or force. She could play the fool and allowed herself to be stepped all over but that meant she would have to talk them into circles and she didn’t really want to bother. It would take too long and she was sick of being walked over. She couldn’t rule the Council with an iron fist like her father, she didn’t have the physical build or intimidation.

She had sided with manipulation.

At the moment she was unknown. No one knew how the princess was going to effect the voice of the Council. They knew nothing about her and she had made sure she’d done her research on every single one of them.

This made it difficult to choose something to wear. She had to make them fear her and yet give no impression whatsoever. In the end she went with a white dress to symbolize purity and innocence but most importantly peace. The hugged her figure but was long enough to brush the floor. It flared at the elbows and had a square neck. She wore no jewelry, but piled her hair atop her head in intricate braids and loops, all held together by a hundred pins.

Her walk to her seat ended and she met each eye quietly. Then she took her father’s seat, making it very clear her intentions.

A few murmurs broke out, but she ignored them. She was acting as queen, they had better get used to it. Firmly she said, “Let the Council begin.”

Kadric had warned her that they would try any tactic to get her off balance, humiliating her in quiet ways. But she had not been prepared for the onslaught of questions and noise that assaulted her. Kadric had also warned her that it would be best if he didn’t come to her aid, they would respect her more if she handled it on her own.

Riva hadn’t been so sure she could do this. She had acted impulsively only this morning when she had run out to stop her father. Many would try and find ways to expose her emotions. But the past was the past and now was now. She had to take control of the situation.

Firmly she stood and slammed her palms on the table before her, with it she added a burst of wind. The strong breeze and sudden outburst quieted the room. She kept a calm face, revealing no emotions (Ah! How long she’d worked on keeping a straight face). She only hoped that they wouldn’t realize that she could work magic, the breeze hadn’t been that strong. She’d added the burst of wind to associate her with power and to get their attention. (She thought she saw Kadric smile in the corner of her eye.)

“Baron Nasady, perhaps you’d like to begin?” Riva spoke quietly and firmly, quickly she looked about the room and realized that most of the Nobles themselves were present too see off the King. How convenient... In her mind she picked out each noble and went over what she knew about them, only half listening to what was going on.

When an issue was discussed to the point where voices were beginning to rise and it was clear that they weren’t going to reach a conclusion. Riva would interject firmly and acknowledge that she understood the importance of the issue but that they would return to it at a later date. If they were unsatisfied she would use the excuse that she needed time to consider the issue more fully. If she allowed two factions to argue too long they wouldn’t be able to continue civilly.

Riva never said anything about an issue and only listened. She wanted to observe everyone and get a first impression of her own. Everything she knew about these people were only hearsay. More importantly she didn’t want to offer any information about herself. She had made sure there was no time for introductions and no time for the other members to corner her and interview her.

Her sole purpose was to guide the meeting. Often she would call on a member by name and occasionally add a little detail about their family or a project that was going on in their region. She wanted to place fear into their hearts, to give them the impression that she was all knowing. She wanted to be a mystery and to keep them on their toes.

It wasn’t like she had many secrets to expose... well, besides the magic and Glen, and she wasn’t really a princess. But rumors had been flying around about that for years and there was no use worrying about it now.

The rest of the meeting ended without incident. Honestly there wasn’t much they could do. There was a lack of man-power and most of the funds were going to the war. There simply wasn’t room in the budget to satisfy all the needs. Most projects were put on hold, a few laws were changed or expanded on. From what Riva had put together from the Court Magician and the gossip, all members of the Council were in it for the power and money. But Riva sensed a unity in the Council. Yes, they were completely self-interested but they understood that if they were invaded and taken over; they would be powerless.

They had a common enemy and they had to keep the kingdom moving or they would lose everything.

The bell tower rung and heads turned. Their time together would have to end, some groaned as they stood. Riva resolved to get comfier chairs. Just because they had to meet twice a week didn’t mean it had to be uncomfortable.

Riva left immediately feeling very concerned. “Kadric, I need much, much more information on how things are run. I felt completely useless in there.” Riva rubbed her eyes, she had to get Alsteare back on it’s feet.

Kadric chuckled, “I thought you did quite well. What do you need?”

“Treasury accounts, where does the money go and where is it coming from? I need specifics, I want to go over all of the transactions, there has to be a way we can get out of this. Second, I need a law book! I was clueless on half of the legal issues discussed. Third, I need more information on the military structure and what is going to be needed to continue supporting the army. Fourth... how do the merchants fit in to all of this? They weren’t exactly of much use.”

“They have close relations with other countries. They control the trade and keep the economy going. In more of a direct relation, they can fund projects. Right now they are as poor as anyone else, we’ve hit them hard not only with taxes but with trade. It’s not safe to travel and no one can afford their wares.” Kadric sighed. “This war is hurting everyone.”

Riva wasn’t sure she understood, but decided not to press the issue. She turned to a different subject one that had been bothering her. “I thought the Council was designed to let everyone have fair say.” She looked to Kadric for confirmation.

He nodded.

“If that’s the case, why didn’t anyone bring up any of their issues? Havn’t they reported their problems?”

Kadric raised an eyebrow, a small smile beginning to show. “Oh, please who wants to from the common man? All they can do is complain.”

Riva looked up in shock.

He laughed. “I’m just giving you their point of view, not mine. Any problems that have been brought up are dead last in priority. They’ve got other things to worry about.”

Riva shook her head. “Don’t people read? A noble can’t build a cart or grow food or anything that is pertinent to survival. This country is built on the common man. A king can only do so much. Even I know that.”

Kadric grinned. “I can’t wait to what you can do.”

Riva shivered and looked at him reproachfully. She had a feeling things were going to get really messy, really fast.

Wednesday, November 23, 2011

Princess Rivalee (Part 9)

Hey all, it's 12:15 in da mornin. So I'm counting this as yesterday's post. I'm only fifteen minutes late.

Short chapter today, didn't have a lot of time to write, but it's okay.

Princess Rivalee (Part 9)

Riva was allowed to see her father off. Even though her eyes raked the ranks of soldiers for Glen and his men. When she did find him he didn’t look up. Her heart went out to him as he disappeared.

Her father rode stoically through the crowd. She watched as he passed. His faced was hard and deeply lined. I wonder what it was like when the Queen was alive. Did he laugh? In her mind a quick flash of a younger version of the King appeared, laughing with someone she assumed to be the Queen. They looked happy, full of life. She blinked and the image was gone.

Just as quickly another thought struck. He’s not going to make it through this. He won’t be coming back and I’ll have never known him. She imagined him young and happy again.

She paused caught in indecision.

Impulsively she broke through her guard and dashed out into the parade. She grabbed her father’s reins and pulled the horse to a stop. The white beast, jerked his head up and then settled.

“What are you doing?” The King hissed angrily, glaring at her with fierce blue eyes.

She swallowed, trying to wet her dry mouth. I don’t know! She thought fervently. All she did know was that she didn’t want her last memory of her... of her only father- the only man she had ever considered as her father- to be a horrible one.

“Father-I... I’ll miss you. Please be careful.” She sputtered.

He stopped and gazed at her intently. Riva stared back steadily, feeling no malice. He dismounted and strode to her. He stood proud and tall and laid a heavy hand on her shoulder like he was laying a great weight there. “Be a good queen- like your mother.” He whispered gruffly, then he nodded once as if to say, “that’s that” and mounted again.

Her guard fell in around her and she felt tears sting at her eyes. “I will, I promise.” She swore vigilantly.